even though this is our final draft when it comes to filming we may decide that other lines may work better, if this does happen then i'll add an updated version at that later date.
scene 1
(music playing)
Elizabeth walking down the isle
Brad: (Mouthing) i love you
(music fades they face each other)
scene 2
Elizabeth: ( gasp )
Brad: wake up you worthless bitch, I'm hungry
(phone rings)
Brad: don't you dare get that, you know what she'll say (1) I'm the only one who will love you, remember that.
( brad answers phone)
Brad: hello Anglia, how are you (2) yes I'm well we're both well (2) sorry anglia just letting Elizabeth have a sleep she's so tired from work (sarcastic tone) (2) ill get her to call you when she wakes up
(Brad walks over to Elizabeth)
Brad: I'm off to work now (1) don't be making any calls behind my back i will find out if you do (2) (kisses her cheek) i love you my Elizabeth
( Brad leaves, slamming the front door)
( Elizabeth falls to the fall and starts to well up as theres a gentle knock on the door)
Person 1: Elizabeth (2) i know you're in there (1) let me help you (2) i know what he's like (1) please (2) let me help
( knocking on the door gets louder and harsher)
Elizabeth: NO
END
When writing our script we wanted to keep the wife's character silent, we think this could show how submissive and obedient she is, that she's become almost an inanimate object in her own life. We have him dominating the film as he's the dominant one in the relationship and the powerful one, so we gave him the most lines but also giving her only one could also symbolise how he 'owns' her, controls everything she does, it could show that she doesn't talk as she's not been given permission.
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