Pitch!

PITCH

MY PITCH
A married couple where the husband is a domestic abuser but times weren't always this way. Starts off with showing happy memories of them, their wedding or a romantic meal showing them at the height of their happiness. Moves on to show them at their current stage where he doesn't love her anymore but needs her, she wants to leave him, all she wants is to be loved and to be happy. She has had enough so makes a bold move to put an end to the suffering.




LARA'S PITCH

The opening will start off with a couple in their happiest state together, maybe on there wedding day, then it will move on to the husband abusing and controlling his wife, still loving her but treating her beyond awful. Then we see the phone call happen, between the police and the wife, in front of the husband but hidden in a sneaky way.


From looking at both of our pitches luckily we have the same sort of idea in mind for our film we decided to write a final pitch together:


FINAL/OUR PITCH


The opening will start off with a married couple in their happiest state together possibly a wedding scene showing that the couple had happy days together. The husband has become a domestic abuser, he still loves her; needs her but acts out as he's scared of losing her. She wants to leave him but emotionally and physically can't. She then reaches her breaking point where she cant deal with anymore and makes a bold move to put an end to the suffering.




In our pitch we didn't want to give too much away about what happens in our film so ended it with a line of suspense.