Mid way hick-up

As Lara and I know the storyline back to front and we know about the back story we seemed to overlook certain things and we thought we may so we asked our teacher Mr Bunce to give it a watch and tell us what he thinks is good and bad! - realistically we just wanted to know what we should improve to make it even better.

He told us that there is a slight flaw in the storyline, if you dont know the back story that is. Its a man doing some boxing and then without giving a reason goes in and starts to beat up his wife....the question was why? why did he just go in and wake up his wife and push her about.

SO

We decided the way around this was to add in a small extra scene of Ollie saying something to let the audience know why he is pushing her about.


We will be filming as soon as the half term is over. - we settled on Thursday 26th.

Onwards and Up!